Saint - From the Cutting Room Floor!
So, just in case you missed the big cover reveal just a week or so ago on Facebook and over at WordWranglers, I have a new book out in just a couple of weeks. A book I love, characters that I'm still thinking about, even though we've been through edits and revisions and more edits. I usually hate a book by this point (don't worry, the love comes back later on). Not so with my Saint (psst, that's him over there...ain't he cute?). I've got a total soft spot for him...which is why I haven't completely cut out scenes that didn't ultimately make the final cut in the novel.
I've kept them. In a special folder I call Saint's Floor. I don't think I'll ever delete them entirely...and so I'm sharing them with you. In the first draft, this scene came early in chapter 2. Without further ado, here's a peek at Saint's Floor:
So, if you want more than a taste, well, you're going to have to wait just a bit. The Saint's Devilish Deal releases October 1, 2012 from Crimson Romance. I'll share a little more about the book, the characters and my undying love for them over the next few weeks - I hope you'll stick around!
I've kept them. In a special folder I call Saint's Floor. I don't think I'll ever delete them entirely...and so I'm sharing them with you. In the first draft, this scene came early in chapter 2. Without further ado, here's a peek at Saint's Floor:
"Spoiled
little rich boy, hmm?" He shook his head, dived into the shallow water and
grabbed Esme around the waist. He pulled her against his body, and the water
surrounding them seemed to boil. Esme held her breath, eyes open to the
stinging water. A few air bubbles escaped Santiago's nostrils and then his
mouth was on hers, demanding that she open to him. That she remember.
Her body responded to the kiss, her
nipples pebbling against the silk of her bra, her hands encircling his neck.
No, she couldn't do this. Not again. Not with this man.
Esme struggled, pushing against his
chest, telling herself it was the lack of oxygen making her fight, not the man
himself. Because he didn't, he couldn't, affect her like this. Not anymore. Not
with so much at stake. Finally they surfaced, both gasping in deep breaths of
air, neither looking at the other. Esme pushed her wet hair off her face,
dunking back so that the tresses smoothed against her head.
"This can't end well,
Esmerelda." He took a deep breath and reached for the surfboard floating
nearby. "Not just because of how we react to one another, but because of
who my family is. I don't want to be here because I've caused enough damage
already. I don't want you here getting caught in the cross-fire."
"Neither of us can leave,
Santiago, not if we're to save the villa." Esme fought the urge to reach
out to the man who had been her best friend. Her first lover. Who now held her
future in his hands and wanted to drop it like a hot potato. "You made a
promise and then Constance changed the transfer papers. If you leave now, the
villa forfeits to the banks."
"That is the best option. You
have a life in California, a good job and a bright future. You shouldn't put
any of that in jeopardy."
You are so organized! My "cutting room floor" is such a mess I just need to run the Dyson over it and forget the whole thing. :-) Great excerpt, Kristi!
ReplyDeleteNicely put, Liz!
Deletesometimes I feel that way, too, Liz...but I'm learning I'm a bit of a packrat...at least where my stories are concerned!
DeleteWonderful scene Kristi...so sad when you have to cut something that good...but I know sometimes it's a necessary evil to get that story just right.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on that upcoming release!!!!
thanks, Christine!
DeleteHi Kristina,
ReplyDeleteLove the tension and history between your characters. Sounds like a great read. Congrats!
Gotta love a pool scene! Can't wait to hear more!
ReplyDeleteThanks, MJ, will be sharing more in the coming weeks.
DeleteGreat scene!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sharon!
DeleteThat was a wonderful scene, Kristina. I wish you much luck with your novel. Can't wait to read it!
ReplyDeletethanks, Deborah!
DeleteOkay left my comment on your Sunday Six! LOL Which you did a good job on.
ReplyDeleteBut I LIKE this scene much more!
Great job,
Neecy
lol - thanks!!
DeleteHmmm... Esme and Santiago are turning the water into a sauna!!! Total hotness!!!
ReplyDeletethanks, Katherine, they *do* have a tendency to heat up!
DeleteThat was a great scene... Interesting that it's laying on the floor.
ReplyDeleteCongrats, Kristi!
thanks, Sara!
DeleteKristina, I can't wait to get updates about the book! It certainly sounds very entertaining. Imagine if that's a "deleted scene!" I know the book is great!
ReplyDeleteArsoleen
Thanks, Arsoleen!
ReplyDeleteKristina,
ReplyDeleteYour new books sounds fantastic. Can't wait for it to be released,
Suzi Love