Saint - From the Cutting Room Floor!

So, just in case you missed the big cover reveal just a week or so ago on Facebook and over at WordWranglers, I have a new book out in just a couple of weeks. A book I love, characters that I'm still thinking about, even though we've been through edits and revisions and more edits. I usually hate a book by this point (don't worry, the love comes back later on). Not so with my Saint (psst, that's him over there...ain't he cute?). I've got a total soft spot for him...which is why I haven't completely cut out scenes that didn't ultimately make the final cut in the novel.

I've kept them. In a special folder I call Saint's Floor. I don't think I'll ever delete them entirely...and so I'm sharing them with you. In the first draft, this scene came early in chapter 2. Without further ado, here's a peek at Saint's Floor:


             "Spoiled little rich boy, hmm?" He shook his head, dived into the shallow water and grabbed Esme around the waist. He pulled her against his body, and the water surrounding them seemed to boil. Esme held her breath, eyes open to the stinging water. A few air bubbles escaped Santiago's nostrils and then his mouth was on hers, demanding that she open to him. That she remember.
            Her body responded to the kiss, her nipples pebbling against the silk of her bra, her hands encircling his neck. No, she couldn't do this. Not again. Not with this man.
            Esme struggled, pushing against his chest, telling herself it was the lack of oxygen making her fight, not the man himself. Because he didn't, he couldn't, affect her like this. Not anymore. Not with so much at stake. Finally they surfaced, both gasping in deep breaths of air, neither looking at the other. Esme pushed her wet hair off her face, dunking back so that the tresses smoothed against her head.
            "This can't end well, Esmerelda." He took a deep breath and reached for the surfboard floating nearby. "Not just because of how we react to one another, but because of who my family is. I don't want to be here because I've caused enough damage already. I don't want you here getting caught in the cross-fire."
            "Neither of us can leave, Santiago, not if we're to save the villa." Esme fought the urge to reach out to the man who had been her best friend. Her first lover. Who now held her future in his hands and wanted to drop it like a hot potato. "You made a promise and then Constance changed the transfer papers. If you leave now, the villa forfeits to the banks."
            "That is the best option. You have a life in California, a good job and a bright future. You shouldn't put any of that in jeopardy."

So, if you want more than a taste, well, you're going to have to wait just a bit. The Saint's Devilish Deal releases October 1, 2012 from Crimson Romance. I'll share a little more about the book, the characters and my undying love for them over the next few weeks - I hope you'll stick around!

Comments

  1. You are so organized! My "cutting room floor" is such a mess I just need to run the Dyson over it and forget the whole thing. :-) Great excerpt, Kristi!

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    1. sometimes I feel that way, too, Liz...but I'm learning I'm a bit of a packrat...at least where my stories are concerned!

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  2. Wonderful scene Kristi...so sad when you have to cut something that good...but I know sometimes it's a necessary evil to get that story just right.

    Congrats on that upcoming release!!!!

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  3. Hi Kristina,

    Love the tension and history between your characters. Sounds like a great read. Congrats!

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  4. Gotta love a pool scene! Can't wait to hear more!

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    1. Thanks, MJ, will be sharing more in the coming weeks.

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  5. That was a wonderful scene, Kristina. I wish you much luck with your novel. Can't wait to read it!

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  6. Anonymous11:49 AM

    Okay left my comment on your Sunday Six! LOL Which you did a good job on.
    But I LIKE this scene much more!
    Great job,
    Neecy

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  7. Hmmm... Esme and Santiago are turning the water into a sauna!!! Total hotness!!!

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    1. thanks, Katherine, they *do* have a tendency to heat up!

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  8. That was a great scene... Interesting that it's laying on the floor.

    Congrats, Kristi!

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  9. Anonymous10:40 PM

    Kristina, I can't wait to get updates about the book! It certainly sounds very entertaining. Imagine if that's a "deleted scene!" I know the book is great!
    Arsoleen

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  10. Kristina,
    Your new books sounds fantastic. Can't wait for it to be released,
    Suzi Love

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